Leave a comment: Are you more comfortable about writing a 3-5 paragraph essay this time, since you have done it once before? Explain your thinking.
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rainbowC
5/31/2016 04:12:19 pm
I am comfortable with it because I think you are expressing what you think a bit more. I also think you can share your opinions with others with a clear explanation of why you think what you think. Well that's all I have to say! Bye!
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twinkleToe
5/31/2016 04:19:45 pm
I am more comfortable with an essay this time because we've already done this before and so there won't be too many surprises jumping out at you. When we did our picture books essays last time, I was like, "Oh-my-gosh-oh-my-gosh-IT'S A FIVE PARAGRAPH ESSAY!", but now, I'm like, "Oh, another one? I'm fine." I guess this shows you that when you do something for the first time it might seem scary, but when you do it more, you get used to it, kind of like our Book Commercials. The first term Commercial was pretty scary for me, but the second one was a bit better. I've gotten used to the atmosphere of the classroom- wait. Off topic. Anyway, good luck to everyone for the essay. Okay, bye!
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Aquatree
5/31/2016 04:47:36 pm
Yes i alot more comfortable to right it because we had parctice before and its kind of like righting a story i thing. Also there is no math coloum for my freshgrade math.
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itzme.eg
5/31/2016 04:50:27 pm
Yes, I am more comfortable with writing the essay because I get a better idea of what it is supposed to look like and what you might be expecting. Plus if I had a choice I would be better off writing an essay on the persecution topic than the picture book topic. Bye!
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mr.enderman1919
5/31/2016 04:53:23 pm
Yes I'm more comfortable with doing a five paragraph essay now because I wont make any of the same mistakes that I made last time, so I will get a better grade this time. See you all tomorrow.
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crazycraft
5/31/2016 05:38:51 pm
Yes! I can't wait to get all my ideas about the novel I read and the unit on to paper! (or the internet!) The first time I did the five paragraph essay I was freaking out and didn't know what to expect. but now I'm excited!
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SuperPunnyGamer
5/31/2016 06:06:23 pm
Yes, I am more confortable with doing a 3-5 paragraph essay. I have done 2 of them. This will be my third one. I know how to do it. See you all tomorrow.
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teddysprinkle
5/31/2016 06:09:56 pm
i am more comfortable with doing one now because i understand it a bit more. I know what to do and i feel confident now! see everyone tomorrow, bye!
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clumsymonkey
5/31/2016 06:21:52 pm
i am a little more comfortable with the 3-5 paragraph essay because i think that the persacution unit is easier than the other essay that we had to do. Im hoping to not be the last one finshed!
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Sparkles
5/31/2016 06:24:09 pm
No, I'm not comfortable about writing a 3-5 paragraph essay because I think that the last essay was much easier and I think that the persecution essay is going to be harder. That's my opinion. Well, bye and see you guys tomorrow.
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FluffyKittens300
5/31/2016 06:53:25 pm
I'm a bit more comfortable with writing a second essay because, like Sparkles, I feel like this one will be harder to write. Persecution is a heavier topic than the picture books. But it will be easier because we know what to do now.
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EpicfaceManiac
5/31/2016 07:23:57 pm
Hi! I am kind of confident in my ability to write a 3-5 paragraph essay! Im kind of nervous though because i missed what you guys were talking about today because of that math test! Also there is no column for my math test for fresh grade! But i will check later just to make sure! Well, see you all tomorrow! Bye for now...
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ItsBubz
5/31/2016 07:54:51 pm
I am feeling more comfortable on writing the essay because now that I know how it is, I know what to do to create a even better essay. I can improve from my last essay. I am not completely comfortable because writing the essay is not my strongest subject but I will give it my 100%. See you all tomorrow :)
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5/31/2016 07:57:15 pm
I'm not really sure because I haven't done a 3-5 paragraph essay before but I think I would be more comfortable with the 3-5 paragraph essay. I usually write stories more than 5 paragraphs that's why I think I would probably be able to write a 3-5 paragraph essay.
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Cleopatra
5/31/2016 08:47:34 pm
I'm feeling a little more comfortable since I have done a 3-5 paragraph essay, mostly because I have done this before and I got a Fully meets.
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Curlyfrie
5/31/2016 09:07:59 pm
Yes, I am definitely feeling a lot more comfortable with writing the 3-5 paragraph essay because I know what to do and I know that it's not that hard so I don't have to worry.
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polarcolar
5/31/2016 09:20:58 pm
Hi guys~! I am back here, at Surrey. I don't know what essay you guys are talking about, but it seems like we have to do one more. Anyway, I had lots of fun, and the weather was like raining when we arrived, but soon, it became up to 40 degrees(it was really sunny)!
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Penguinpartay
5/31/2016 09:58:17 pm
I'm not really comfortable with it yet because I either right barely any but it's detailed or I write way to much and it doesn't make any sense
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ggingersnap03
5/31/2016 10:00:57 pm
Yes I am more comfortable about writing an essay because I have had a lot more practice on how to make things extra detailed. I did a good essay before so I should be ok.
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Redeggnog
5/31/2016 10:44:25 pm
I'm not confertbul with essay I get neves thinking about iy
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speedyslug
6/1/2016 07:33:25 am
Yes. I am able to write a paragraph because we have done it before.
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Shadowdogs
6/1/2016 07:44:15 am
Yes, because last time I was not responsible with my essay and did not work on it. So this time I will make sure all the criteria is complete with no spelling and grammar mistakes and with a proper conclusion and lead. See you all soon! :D
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Ninjaaloverr
6/1/2016 08:34:36 am
I am kind of comfortable with it but with read the books a while ago so I don't remember much.
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